Wednesday, July 20, 2011

Homework: Unit 4 "aint so, is not" exer 2

As a youngster, I may have visited a museum or two during grade school field trips, I can’t remember much about those places because my main interest was science fiction; I was by far a Star Wars junkie for most of my childhood. Yet now as an adult I appreciate things a whole lot more.

The time, energy, man-hours and money it took to keep those vehicles looking the way they did was mind boggling.


*There are several other places that I could have use less academic language and more of my own. I think that it was due to my mindset of wanting to accomplish the opposite or reasons that I may have planted in my own head. It think that I may have been trying to write as academic as possible in order to get a good grade.

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